Monday, September 8, 2008

You.

How do you still have this crazy command over my mind...
There have been others, but there have been no others like You.
Nearly inexplicable,
But completely inextricable
From my heart.
When a dream becomes a nightmare
That drops me to my knees, because
It was about you Not really Loving me.
One simple conversation, the first one in a long time
in Real Time
And my heart is pounding like I cannot believe
Why
Can you do this
To me?

3 comments:

horefrost said...

I really like the way you wrote this. It flows very well. I'm surprised you don't do more poetry on here....

I also wanted to say Thank you, and I Love you. Thanks for always taking the time to let me know that I am special, and that I am Loved.

G said...

I do love you, but... maybe let's not be too presumptuous that anything about such things is about you eh? ;)

Why in the world would I call our love "nearly inexplicable"? I can sure as hell explain it, with about a million reasons before I'd have to pause to think.

Or say that we had "one simple conversation, the first one in a long time in Real time"?

We'd have problems.

horefrost said...

Actually, for some reason, that posted on the wrong blog entry. It was suppose to go under the "I miss you" entry. The latter part of my comment was for the conversation we had that night.